Introduction:
- Attention Getter: (Tell us something that will immediately grab our attention)
- Steve Jobs, somewhat ironically, once said that “Great things in business are never done by one person; they’re done by a team of people.”
- Listener Relevance: (Tell us why we should listen to this presentation)
- That is why I am standing before you today, in the hopes that, together, we can build something great.
- Speaker Credibility: (What research/personal experience make you credible on this topic)
- I know myself, I know my strengths, and I know I can be a valuable asset.
- Thesis Statement: (In one sentence, what is the goal of your speech?)
- [As mentioned in the Listener Relevance, Speaker Credibility, and Preview: I want to prove I am a valuable asset to have on a team.]
- Preview: (Tell us specifically and concisely, in order, what your main points will be.)
- To prove that to you, however, I would like to discuss what I’ve done, who I’ve become, and where I’d like to go.
Transition: (Take us to the first main point)
- In order to explore who I am and what I have done, I would like to focus on two skills I cherish – (A) the ability to work with a variety of people and (B) a keen eye for detail.
Body:
I. Main Point One: What I’ve Done and Who I’ve Become
Listener Relevance Link: (Tell us how this point connects to us)
- When it comes to working with others (L.R.L), I have been both a leader and a team member. I have worked with academics, athletes, and authority figures. I know what it means to work toward a common goal. This is best-reflected through two aspects of my life – politics and sports.
- Student Government
- During high school, I was elected to the Student Government Association three years running, eventually becoming president. I worked on committees with students, teachers, and administrators. I was responsible for events and decisions that would affect large amounts of people – planning dances, running fundraisers, and developing budgets. I had to constantly communicate information, delegate tasks, and, most importantly, listen to everyone involved.
- Sports
- When it comes to sports, I have competed in everything from softball and tennis to quiz bowl and basketball. Having been both a player and a captain, I realize that the only way to be successful is to put trust in others. I couldn’t catch every hit or answer every question, I had to know my limits, know the strengths of my teammates, and trust in their abilities.
- Student Government
- Pertaining to my eye for detail,
- Avid Reader/Editor/Researcher
- I am an avid reader. With that love of reading comes a natural ability to work with content. I have taken many advanced English and History courses that have built on that ability and taught me the importance of editing (grammar/syntax/vocabulary) and research (understanding and verifying background information).
- Proficient in HTML/CSS
- I also have experience with design. I am proficient in HTML and CSS having taken Internet Technologies as well as this course. I plan on expanding this skill set next semester with ITEC 3650 and Mobile Web Development.
- Avid Reader/Editor/Researcher
Transition: (Take us to the second main point)
- Now that we have discussed where I have been, I would like to discuss where I want to go and what I hope to gain.
II. Main Point Two: Where I’d Like to Go
Listener Relevance Link: (Tell us how this point connects to us)
- First and foremost, I want to use this team experience (L.R.L) to gain real-world experience.
- Working with Clients
- I want to learn how to work with clients – how to communicate and present ideas effectively.
- Marketing Myself to Employers
- I want to know how to market myself to employers – how to project my knowledge and experience in a confident manner.
- Working with Clients
- The second skill I would like to gain is more web-design expertise.
- Javascript and Increased CSS
- I want to learn Javascript and increase my CSS and HTML knowledge.
- Design Principles and Increased Efficiency
- I want to learn advanced design principles and how to work with a high level of efficiency.
- Javascript and Increased CSS
Transition: (Take us to the conclusion)
- So, to sum everything up,
Conclusion:
- Restate Thesis (Restate the main idea of the presentation)
- I can be the team member you need –
- Main Point Summary (Explicitly review the main points you talked about)
- the member who works well with others, who cares about the details, and who wants to keep getting better.
- Clincher (Refer back to attention getter)
- In the words of Steve Jobs, we can do great things together.
